Are these translations good enough?

I am printing some labels. Since English is my second language, is
there any one can help me to check the following labels are well
translated or should I use better expressions in English?

The labels are:
Letter of Recommendation
Transcript for Graduate Study
Transcript for Secondary Bachelor Degree
Transcript for Undergraduate Study

Thanks for your time and looking forward to your reply.

 

'Transcript of' would be better English - but it does not make sense
logically in the context here. <http://www.answers.com/transcript?nafid=3>.

One meaning of 'Draft' is "A tentative, provisional, or preparatory
writing out of any document (as a will, contract, lease, and so on) for
purposes of discussion and correction, which is afterwards to be prepared
in its final form." Is that closer to what you intend?

Other possible words might be 'prospectus', 'curriculum', 'proposal',
'plan' ...

 

This is fine.
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These depend upon your intent. A transcript is a written record of
something that has already occurred. If that is the case, you should
say, "Transcript of...".

On the other hand, if you wish to undertake these things, Whiskers'
suggestions of "proposal" or "plan" would be better.

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What is your intended use as this would make the application more
appropriate?

"Letter of Recommendation" is a letter from a 3rd party to a prospective
employer of the 1st party.
You are seeking employment at xyz co inc and they want a "LOR". You ask your
local doctor to write one.

"Transcript" can refer to the past grades of a given school. For instance, a
college may want to see the transcripts of your grades from your high
school. Or it can also refer to "minutes of a meeting".
However, depending on your intended use, that may not be what you're looking
for.
Let us know what you intend to use the label for and you'll get a better
response.