On Oct 17, 10:45*am, "mmyvusenet" <usenetm...@invalid.invalid> wrote:
> Hello:
>
> I was passing through the historical center of Lima, I had the opportunity
> to take this photo about this event:
>
> http://www.flickr.com/photos/mmyv/5088440174/
>
> Thanks for your comments.
>
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> MMYVhttp://www.mmyv.com
Not bad, Miguel, not bad at all. It has its weaknesses/ Check you
histogram for blown highlights, for one thing.
Compositionally, the spatial placement of the various components
mostly works , but, and I think this is a big but, the attention of
the Bride, Groom and I assume family is directed away from the priest
and you have to wonder what are they looking at (or do you have to
look straight ahead when you are getting married in Peru?). If they
were looking toward the priest there would be a natural flow around
the picture. You can't do anything about that, but you could change
your position so that we could see what they are looking at. That
would be to your camera right and while it might mean losing the
priest, he might not be important to the shot with that take.
You're definitely improving and that's great to see. I suggest that
you explore your subjects more with different angles and not be
satisfied with the first one that you think is good. When you have
the time, like you would in this situation, shoot more shots and make
them different.
Keep it up.
Vance